Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 2: 8/20

In terms of an interim grade Level 2

• Planning and research evidence may be partially incomplete;

• There is basic research into similar products and a potential target audience;

• There is basic organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;

• There is basic work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding;

• There is a basic level of care in the presentation of the research and planning;

• Time management may not be good.

Medal: Since the last feedback you have added some new elements such the BFI analysis, script, preliminary task evidence, which has been a very good. 

What we still need to add as (well as below) are:

• storyboard, 
• production schedule 
• images, that will help illuminate the points you are making. Well done Ella for completing the following tasks you have done so far.  Good work on Film noir and opening conventions etc concept and getting some tasks finished to a decent standard    

8/12/15:  (Still to do) What we now need is to see is your evidence:

• for designing and creating studio logo's and your understanding of the correct conventional title orders as studied in class. 
• Some images are also required to enhance the look and design your blog. 

• We are still also missing the opening of Seven analysis, 
• the opening of a horror analysis and the evaluation of the preliminary task. 

Things tasks are an absolute must in order to get a good grade for coursework.

Please provide feedback, in the form of a new post, how and when you hope to achieve the tasks. 

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	9/20
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A